Donation

Despite this story I still think everyone should be an organ doner

 

DONATION

PAGE ONE

PANEL ONE: Close up of a gurney as it smashes through a set of hospital doors being pushed by a paramedic and a nurse. The paramedic is obviously panic stricken. The patient on the gurney has an oxygen mask on but is passed out.

PARAMEDIC

THIS IS A CODE RED! WE NEED A CRASH TEAM STAT!

 

PANEL TWO: Mid level shot of a doctor pressing down on the chest of the man. His sleeves are rolled up and his collar is undone as he desperately tried to save the man. Next to him the cardiograph has done flat as nurses rush around attempting to help with drips and various medical paraphernalia.

 

DOCTOR

DAMMIT!

 

PANEL THREE: The doctor stands in a hall way talking to a woman and child. The woman and holds the child tightly to her side, her other hand covers her mouth as she starts to sob. The doctor arms are open in a kind manner as he explains the death of her husband.

 

DOCTOR

..AS YOU KNOW HE WAS AN ORGAN DONNER. SOMEONE WE COME TO HELP YOU MAKE ARRANGEMNTS FOR THE REMAINS. I'M SORRY FOR YOU LOSS.

 

PANEL FOUR: Side view of the naked body as it lies on the slab in the mortuary. The mortician snaps on a rubber glove before he begins the procedure. We can see that the chest cavity is already opened.

 

MORTICIAN

RIGHT LETS GET THESE OUT OF YOU. IT ALL GOES TO A GOOD CAUSE AFTERALL.

 

 

PAGE TWO

 

PANEL ONE: a pair of hands places the intestines onto hanging scales, they're healthy looking so far as intestines go.

 

MORTICIAN (OFF)

THEY LOOK GREAT.

 

PANEL TWO: Same again but this time with lungs

 

MORTICIAN (OFF)

THEIR FANTASTIC.

 

PANEL THREE: Once more but with a heart.

 

MORTICIAN (OFF)

AND THAT'S JUST PERFECT.

 

PANEL FOUR: The mortician places the heart into a medical ice box, its full with ice.

 

MORTICIAN

RIGHT. YOU EXPECTED SO WE BETTER GET A MOVE ONE.

 

PANEL FIVE: A view of the mortician as he opens a door labelled private. It quite obviously not in the morgue any more as the walls are the usual dull hallway found in hospitals. The mortician is carrying the ice box as he enters.

 

 

PAGE THREE

 

 

PANEL ONE: A simple view of the ice box resting on the floor with the lid off. The ice remains but the heart is no longer inside the box.

 

PANEL TWO: Shot of a mortician's left hand old the heart tightly.

 

MORTICIAN (OFF)

AND WITH THIS HEART...

 

PANEL THREE: Shot of the mortician's right hand holding a sacrificial dagger.

 

MORTICIAN (OFF)

WITH THIS SACRAFICE...

 

PANEL FOUR: The reveal. The mortician is stood with his back to the reader. The heart and dagger raised high to a massive C'thulhu statue. It's eyes staring at the reader and its tentacles spilling all over the panel.

 

MORTICIAN

I INVOKE YOUR NAME AND RAISE YOU FROM YOUR SUNKEN CITY MY DARK LORD.